Macbook Pro Commercial - ID# 256
Glenbrook South
Commercial
Entry Description
This is a commercial of the Apple Macbook Pro.
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- 4/24 1:38 pm - The first shot the chromebook is out of focus. Make sure to pay attention to the little things especially if it's the focus of your commercial. I liked the editing and graphics placement. I thought the shots were well paced with the music.
- 3/4 7:12 am - I really liked the one of these things is not like the other at the beginning! I would break up the "You deserve better" caption up differently to come across as different words to add more clarity.
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