Football edit of BHS vs Palatine football homecoming game.
Positives: Some very nice editing effects - the sequence where all the B's in the helmets morphed together was a very clever edit. A good mix of action sequences some close up and some further away.
Improvements: Until the score came in I didn't know if I was watching a recap of a game already played or a promo for an upcoming game. There was no date or location or anything given. The logo/shield "behind" the flagpole was never truly revealed in full.
Positives: Great use of sound effects. Pacing of edits helped build energy.
Improvements: Graphics need improvement to help tell the story. I had to review the video to understand the matchup since it was covered by the flag. The video was packed with effects. The first half was nice but the second half felt like effects were added just to have them instead of helping move the story forward.
Positives: - Really liked the effects used in the edit, especially where you had essentially cut out a player and used him as the transition into the next clip - thought that was very creative. - Sound was well mixed and appropriate level throughout.
Improvements: - For a Homecoming recap, I expected to see a little bit of off-the-field excitement as well - ideally some fans or something else to give this a bit of energy beyond just game highlights.
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