Veteran's Night - ID# 260

Lockport Township

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Students cover the Veteran's Night event at LTHS.

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• 3/3 11:40 am - The pan shots at the start aren't great. You can achieve this better by getting some wide, medium, and tight shots. That is way more effective. The b-roll seemed far away. The interview was ok, but in a package, the reporter doesn't typically show up visually in the interview. It forces the interviewee to face away from the camera. The co-reporters also throws the package off as it's not clear whose story this is. The interviews are good, and I like the interview vets, but it seemed like the answers weren't all answering the same question. Good nat sound break at the end.

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