Bullying - ID# 275
Richards High School
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
This is a PSA about bullying.
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- 4/30 2:22 pm - The voice-over and info work well, and the reaction shots plus the teacher/student reenactment are solid with good audio. To improve it, add more audio elements to build emotion and guide the viewer and smooth out the levels since they’re a bit uneven. The VO especially jumps around after 0:34—some parts are much louder or quieter. Overall, great work!
- 4/27 11:43 am - Nice job overall, you have a really nice and clean production here. I really appreciate your voice-over and the information provided, it worked to push the PSA forward. You have some fantastic reaction shots and your reenactment with the teacher and student was filmed pretty well along with some great audio capturing. For some tips, I would add more audio elements to heighten the tension the girl is feeling and also give the audience some auditory cues on how to feel (dramatic music in the beginning, sad music when we see how it’s impacting the character, optimistic music at the end, etc). You have a great start, keep up the good work.
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