MMEA Fest

A news package covering York High School's student ran sports media club, York Sports Network.

2/28 12:03 pm - - You have a solid reporter delivery for the tracks. - Come up with stronger writing to lead into sots; the tracks leading to a sot should also have some info - Frame your subjects so we see more of them and if we see stuff in the background, it should help tell the story and be deliberate.
2/26 12:42 pm - It sounds like multiple people are narrating this story, or it was recorded on different mics that make it sound that way. I don't love stories about what we do, but this did tell a nice story. Be careful not to make this a pat on the back or a commercial for what you guys do. You don't have to say, here is a person talking about the thing you're about to hear them say. There is a black flash before the teacher interview. The interview should not introduce themselves (or cut that out). Great soundbite, too long (we love you BC).
2/21 2:30 pm - - First shot was good but the framing on the SOT was not great - Writing was weak in that they would introduce the SOT and SOT introduced themselves - There were too many photos - Hit black in the story - The NATS were good - The video was varied (walking out with equipment, control room) - Audio was good, tracking was good - Didn’t quite feel like a package – felt more like a promo

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