Lip Lab - ID# 279
Richards High School
School Promotion Non Sports
Entry Description
This is a promotional video for Fashion and Beauty Club highlighting their trip to Lip Lab Chicago.
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- 4/20 9:23 am - Good variety of shots and nice pace of edits. Consider adding some nice close ups of the techs working with the colors and mixing etc. Like how you used the reflection in the mirror to show faces. This almost shows like a mini-news story and such the information is good. I think this piece does a nice job showcasing the trip that the students took to the Lip Lab. I'm wondering if you might add some clips of what the class looks like back at school and combine the two settings? That way prospective students get a chance to see the envinronment that they'll be in most days and this trip is an added bonus of being in that class? Examples of student work in Fasion and Beauty too would be great to see. Voiceover is solid and matches the pace of the edits. This would be a good add in social media too. Overall, good job, just look for more ways to enhance the content and really promote the program!
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