Varsity Girls Volleyball - ID# 279
Maine East
School Promotion
Entry Description
Promoting the 2024 Maine East High School Girls Varsity Volleyball Team!
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 8:16 pm - STORY: Overall really great job! You introduce a lot of the players and I think the audience connects with them in that way as they watch the video! SOUND: You do a great job mixing in your music bed. It would be nice to hear the crowd when the team has a winning point. I think 0:31 would be a great spot for this. CAMERA: You do a great job including different camera shots of not just the whole team but close ups! I think that’s what a lot of these promos need and you went for it! I love the framing when we see the name of the player alongside them like at 0:41. Great execution! LIGHTING: Very creative lighting with the blue lights! Definitely adds a stylized feel to your video. EDITING: I really like a lot of the complex edits you include that go along with the song. I also appreciate the text that you use. It is very much edited in that fast paced social-media style that we are all familiar with.
- 4/24 11:18 am - I really enjoyed the mix in of typography and effects in this video. You did a great job illustrating some of the lyrics of the song without overdoing it. The player intros at the end were creatively lit and timed well. This is a great, high-energy promotion video!
Judge 1
Positives: Live action coupled with athlete photos Liked the way athletes were displayed
Improvements: Camera shaky at several points Shots of volleyball action could have been more clean
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Judge 3
Positives: You incorporated a lot of very effective non-traditional elements. The blue lighting used during the segment where you were introducing the players works very well. I am a little mixed with the editing/pacing. Much of it is very dynamic and defines the team. But there should be a few breaks in the action where you let your audience take in all that is happening by extending a few of the shots a little. This could just be selecting a few shots and extending them by a second or a second and a half. Make sure that you keep the same energy flow that has already been established. Your project works as it is. These comments are just pushing the concept more. Your project caught my curiosity about the team. You did a very good job defining that.
Improvements: Consider including a few more shots of the team playing volleyball. You did a great job introducing the players. With a little more game play footage you can show what they do.
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