Feminism - ID# 272
Metea Valley
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
A PSA about feminism and how you see it in the world
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- 4/23 10:16 pm - Background music is a little loud, competes with your voiceover. It's hard connecting your opening voiceover with the interviews.There are two competing storylines going here instead of one cohesive message. Ends abruptly. What's the call to action? Nice steady shots, especially like the diversity of wideshots used as b-roll for the voiceover
- 2/26 1:46 pm - Audio Mix is crucial when you have a voice over and a music bed. Your voice over was a bit low in the mix, and your speaker was soft spoken. The music bed was too loud in the mix, making it difficult to hear the opening voice over. The interview clips at the end were okay, but the last one cut off pretty abruptly. Also, it was a man talking about feminism, which might be okay in the middle of those testimonials, but perhaps you could have chosen an interview clip with a female that would have been a more suitable conclusion for the piece. It just felt like this PSA was an excerpt from a longer documentary, and not its own project.
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