MMEA Fest

A cut of the performance of Overture performed by Patricia Gill & Diane Marelli.

5/1 1:45 am - The graphics were clean and easy to read without being distracting and you did a good job keeping the focus on the piano players. I also liked the use of the two camera angles and how you used dissolves to transition between them. One thing to keep working on is shot variety and timing. At times, shots stayed up a bit too long, especially early on, and there were opportunities to go tighter or switch more frequently to keep things visually engaging. Mixing in a bit more back and forth, especially at the beginning, would help add some energy and keep the viewer more locked in.
4/30 9:39 am - Great, clear, non-distracting graphics! Way to also keep the focus on the piano players, and I really liked the two different camera shots you utilized, but I would have liked to see a little more back & forth at the beginning.
4/16 2:04 pm - Good use of dissolves between the two cameras but feel you stayed on the same shots for too long. The shot from behind the piano was up for nearly a minute after the first dissolve and I believe their were opportunities to go in tighter and mix up the shots a bit more.

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