Sleep Demo - ID# 284
Homewood-Flossmoor
Demonstration
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Sleep.
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- 4/25 8:12 pm - The graphics and steps work really well together. The steps are cohesive and the story of it is effective. The audio of the music was a good level. Sometimes it was hard to understand what was being said, so slow down a little bit. Overall, your demo was informative about the topic and shared the steps well.
- 4/1 1:01 pm - Slow down on your VOs. There were times where it was a little hard to understand what you were saying because you were talking fast. Good music bed in your video - the audio level was perfect. Good information in the steps. I like how your steps moved to the lower left corner of the screen. If this were my video, I would have laid out the text a little differently - would have made some of the steps into 2-lines of text instead of stretching it out in 1 line. With 1 line, you had a lot of empty space on your graphics. The shot of you reading the book had very little of the book showing - frame it just a bit differently so we can see that you’re reading the book. Nice job.
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