Our Cultural Identities - ID# 287
Highland Park
School Promotion
Entry Description
Taking a look at how we can embrace our cultural identities during Hispanic Heritage Month. Link to transcript: https://tinyurl.com/2nhmmn9b
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- 4/24 9:34 pm - Great focus for a promo. Love the beginning/ending titles. A fairly long promo with a lot of talking heads. There is some broll but not nearly enough. To have a piece this long, you need broll. I would also vary the shot composition of all the subjects in a way that is clean and stylistic.
- 3/4 12:55 pm - POSITIVES: The on-set footage is generally framed nicely, with good lighting. The faculty/staff shots at the end show support of the students in the school community. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: @:42 you suddenly add the animated graphic of his statement in Spanish, and never return to that technique. Was it for emphasis??; @52 we have a brief B-roll shot. But it's mostly talking heads, which is difficult to retain an audience, Your message is clearly about embracing your heritage at HP. You needed to identify what you could shoot as B-roll that would support the on-set shots, and use THAT to write your script.
- 2/19 1:22 pm - -Great use of subtitles -Liked the inclusion of the text on the screen...but it felt random since it was only in one spot? -Camera quality was inconsistent
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