Lavish - ID# 305
Maine East
Music Video
Entry Description
An homage to Senior Year.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/15 10:15 am - STORY: This video acts as a celebration of senior year and captures a wide rage of candid moments. Your message is clear that senior year of high school should be fun! SOUND: Your audio is mixed appropriately. I think you picked the right music track as it matches the energy of the footage. Something to consider for an extra addition would be to include sounds from the actual clips in your footage. We see people laughing or saying something, but we don’t actually hear anything. If you bring in this audio (not in every clip) it can highlight an emotion within that moment! CAMERA: Your footage is drawn from real-life moments and that adds a lot of character and personality to your music video. A lot of your camera angles and framing work to show that spontaneous energy of senior year. You have some camera movements that are noticeably shaky like the pan at 1:00 and the shot at 1:43. If you can’t use a tripod at the moment, really try to keep your elbows close to your body so that your arms stay still as you are holding the camera. This can go a long way to improving shot clarity. That said, your shot at 1:43 is actually a great example of a “frame within a frame”. It adds great visual interest and depth to your shot! LIGHTING: You used the available lighting you had effectively. Something to keep in mind is white balance. Some clips look a bit more blue or yellow (because of different color temperatures). A quick few edits to white balance on your timeline can help make the project feel more unified. EDITING: Your fast-paced editing is mostly aligned to the beat. This keeps the viewer engaged. The cuts in many parts of your music video match the music’s tempo and vibe. While most moments cut to the beat effectively, there are slower segments that feel inconsistent. For example, between 0:21 and 0:26, the clips are noticeably longer than those before or after - even though the beat remains the same. Shortening those longer clips or adding faster cuts could keep the energy consistent. Also, consider trimming the clip at 1:23 as it lingers a bit too long. Overall your project captures important moments to cherish from senior year. You’ve got a strong voice and clear identity coming though in your work. Great work and keep creating! I’d love to see more of your work!
- 2/18 9:43 am - The opening sequence is particularly strong, with great use of pacing and visually interesting shots that immediately grab the viewer’s attention. Thoughtful shot composition and dynamic movement in the early moments set the stage for an engaging video, making the audience excited to see what unfolds next. The variety of visuals and editing choices help establish a compelling tone right from the start. One of the standout elements of this music video is how well it captures the essence of the high school experience. The energy, camaraderie, and relatable moments make it feel authentic and fun. The creative approach to showcasing school life adds a personal touch, making the video feel both nostalgic and engaging for its intended audience. Additionally, the pacing and editing remain strong throughout the video. The cuts align well with the beat of the music, keeping the momentum steady and ensuring that the visuals complement the rhythm of the song. Smooth transitions and well-timed edits help maintain engagement and enhance the storytelling. To take future projects to the next level, consider incorporating even more advanced cinematography techniques—such as unique framing, depth of field, or subtle lighting adjustments—to further enhance the professional quality of the visuals. Overall, this is a well-executed, fun, and creative music video that effectively captures high school experiences with strong pacing and editing. Great job!
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