She Kills Monsters - ID# 317
Maine South
School Promotion Non Sports
Entry Description
As we open Tilly's Diary, we get transported into the DND world. Rocking with popular 90’s music, "She Kills Monsters" gives a glimpse into the story of two loving sisters.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 3:12 pm - Nice promo for your school play. Clean audio on the VO with a clear synopsis, nice shots of the show, appropriate music for the promo. A clear Call to Action that is the right length and should work well in attracting audiences. Nice work!
Judge 1
Positives: Interesting drawing behind scenes that added a comic book feel good long shots of play activity
Improvements: Could have use more variety in shooting of scenes with close ups and less long shots
Judge 2
Positives: Leaning into the 90s TV commercial and movie trailer aesthetic is a really smart creative choice for this show and it works. The border treatment and editing style commit to the bit and give it a distinct personality. The overall structure does a good job breaking down what the show is about and the concept is genuinely cool.
Improvements: The voiceover is the main thing that needs attention. Right now it doesn't quite sync up with what's happening on screen, so the cuts and the narration feel like they're running on separate tracks. Matching the voiceover beats to the footage would make a big difference and really sell the trailer feel this video is going for. When the audio and visuals lock in together it'll be a much stronger piece.
Judge 3
Positives: That was close to professional. Great use of graphics mixing with video. The synopsis was concise and to the point. You got the full message in this video from start to finish. Great job!
Improvements: All promos deserve a website for more information. So many promos leave me hanging ........... where I want more information. That's about it. Keep up the good work.
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