Off The Record - ID# 310
Lyons Township
Talk Show
Entry Description
"Off The Record" is what happens when two advanced seniors in media class who have ADHD produce and host their own talk show. We just talk about different topics and have fun!
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- 4/23 11:55 am - Host personalities show through really well! Overall vibe makes me feel like I'm with my friends. Set works well; the repeat edits and cuts are unique. I think a quick intro or a statement on what the show is about would be helpful and get the audience into it right away. Overall well done and if this is a "pilot" for an overall larger concept, I'd say develop it and run with it!
- 4/23 7:48 am - STORY: Well written and conversational but seemed disorganized and random. Although this may have been the concept for the show it was still difficult to follow PRODUCTION. Camera shots were framed nicely and the pacing of the edit was visually appealing. The graphic on the monitor was extremely professional. TALENT: Well spoken and professional. Had good chemistry and made the show engaging.
- 4/17 1:53 pm - Hosts are engaging and conversational but the topics are really all over the place and a bit hard to follow. I know that plays into what is said in the entry description but a little bit of order could have made this quite effective. Both hosts show a strong personality, seem very comfortable, and are interesting to listen to. Technical side of this is very clean.
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