Distraction - ID# 325

Riverside Brookfield

Public Service Announcement

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Entry Description

This PSA aims to point out one of the most distracting elements of Teenage life - social media.

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Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: 1) overlays worked well 2) sound track—sfx, music, vo

Improvements: 1) way too much text at close—yikes! 2) uninteresting video of student—need more creative shots

Judge 2

Positives: Very good editing with all the different screens and overlays and showing the character from different angles. End title information was very engaging and effective.

Improvements: The typing out of the end titles was good, but they should have just gone off the screen all at once (per screen) - the deleting sound and visual was off-putting.

Judge 3

Positives: 1) Great visuals and art direction. 2) High production quality while still feeling believable.

Improvements: 1) End text graphics were up for too long and could have been condensed. 2) Would have been good to understand why endless scrolling is bad and the negative effects of it.

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