OLAS at RBHS - ID# 320
Riverside Brookfield
School Promotion
Entry Description
A short promotional piece made highlighting the Riverside Brookfield High School's Organization of Latin American Students (OLAS) and their role at the high school.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 10:00 pm - Great production value...the set, lighting, audio. Definitely promotes the organization. Some broll is incredibly effective and other feels like it was maybe all you had. Remember to always S.W.A.P. Synch Words And Pictures. Make sure the broll is enhancing the message.
- 3/4 12:59 pm - POSITIVES: Good topic; the segments shot on set with the colored background set the right tone with an OLAS flair. good idea to include shots of the club activities AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: The B-roll lacks focus, with too many shots of peoples' backs instead of their faces, which could show the connections students have to one another. Editing bounces back & forth between the host, and then only ONE clip that's B-roll. We don't need to watch her sit & talk. Use her interview as a VO, and then when you cut to B-roll that connects to what she's saying. Come back every now & then to the interview. You should be about 20% talking head and 80% B-roll.
- 2/19 1:29 pm - -Really unique background for the talking head! -The audio of the a-roll feels a bit muffled...also may want to lower the background audio -Great use of b-roll
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