Gotta Go to Goodwill! - ID# 33
Maine West
Commercial
Entry Description
Don't have anything to wear? Goodwill is the place to shop!
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 3:04 pm - This was a funny video concept! I like how you told this story. You had some creative camera shots, and the editing was decent. Try and increase the speed on some shots as they prolong the video a bit.
- 3/3 7:49 am - I think the concept is there to help sell the store, but I feel that you can really add more to make the video just a bit more engaging tone-wise. Maybe some sound effects when you turn toward the window, something at the end when the reveal shows that it's the friend's sister, something additional would really help boost this. Some of the shots kind of linger a bit too long as well, especially for a commercial where you're trying to show the vibe of this place where you can find the most random clothes you need.
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