Pure Life: Begins Now - ID# 33

Morton East

Commercial

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Entry Description

A short advertisement about the water bottle brand "Pure Life". Three students all share one thing in common, enjoying pure hydration.

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• 4/24 11:33 am - I like the rack focus shot in the beginning. I think this could be a lot shorter. Each student could have one simple scene. The shots were a little dark, too, so keep an eye on that while filming or try to brighten them in post. I like the concept of the three students perspectives.
• 3/3 10:30 pm - Clever idea of bringing the logo into focus as the person approaches the water bottle at the beginning, and I love how you cut to the logo from the bottle at the end!

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