Social Media PSA - ID# 336

Bremen

Public Service Announcement

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Entry Description

As the use of social media increases the result it has on relationships is extremely impactful

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Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: 1) camera work 2) overall concept

Improvements: 1) needed a website reference at close 2) this would have worked better as a :30 psa

Judge 2

Positives: You could REALLY tell the girl was "tuned out" to Nana. Great editing of the phone showing all the different distractions the girl was absorbed in.

Improvements: The flower moving to accomodate the end titles was strange. Flower could have just been placed in to that specific side. And who is JR? Spot did not convey the passage of time as far as Nana and the cookies and then she was gone. Was it hours? Days? Months?

Judge 3

Positives: 1) The message of the distracting nature of being on your device is very clear 2) Camera work and match cuts were a great editing technique to use to show the passage of time

Improvements: 1) Need a stronger call to action at the end and information on resources 2) Story felt to drag a little bit, and could've been condensed

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