How to Make Pizza - ID# 339
Bremen
Demonstration
Entry Description
A video about how to make a pizza at home
Copyright Info
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/19 2:38 pm - Overall, the video has great camera shots, sound, and before-and-after shots that explain the steps well. However, the lighting could be improved, and some added graphics explaining the steps could be helpful. Additionally, the introduction could be longer and more engaging, and try and increase the volume on your dialogue.
- 2/28 8:59 pm - Such a great variety of camera angles and shots. Doing this makes demo videos immensely more interesting, so kudos to you! Voice over is well done but at times feels a little rushed. You had 16 seconds to play with for this category, and I think slowing down your delivery at a few points would have been good (like when going over ingredients for example). Music is great and your audio levels are mixed well. Editing of the video is well done too. Nice work!
- 2/28 3:43 pm - Good use of high angle camera shots throughout the video. Voice-overs are well done. Good use of Close-Up camera shots. Music selection works well with the images you recorded. Keep producing more videos.
Judge 1
Positives: Each step is easy to follow and explained well. The voice over explains what is happening on screen and adds to what the viewer sees. Some of the shots have a unique perspective (for example at 1:16 and 1:26) and are unique and spice up how the ingredients at pizza are presented in a way that keeps the viewer engaged.
Improvements: A brief intro would further enhance the video. A title card or shots of the finished product would give the viewer a preview of what the end result should be and would grab their attention. The video has a strong sense of composition throughout, but the images are consistently a little under exposed. The viewer can still see what is happening, but details in the shadows are being lost.
Judge 2
Positives: -Nice use of before and after. -Way to show people eating it at the end.
Improvements: -Voice track needs to be louder and slower. -Maybe think about a graphic to explain what you are doing -Lighting is low.
Judge 3
Positives: Yummy! Loved opening and ending with your little helper. Great tight shots, especially the chopping sequence. Nice oven POV shot!
Improvements: Lost your voice on yeast. Video seems dark even with my brightness turned up. Sound was a little intrusive and interfered with the gift of your voice. Could have used some reasons for rising and dimpling. Should have submitted some pizza samples along with the video.
Judge 4
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 5
Positives:
Improvements: