Pancakes! - ID# 332
South Elgin
Commercial
Entry Description
The definitive and once and for all commercial about the greatest breakfast invention the world has ever seen. Pancakes. No brand names here, just a fun highlight of a staple of the breakfasting genre.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 8:53 am - I enjoyed your stop motion take on the commercial. The graphics were great and engaging. Your editing was executed very well and the overall commercial was very engaging!
- 3/8 8:37 am - Nice premise here with this video! Loved the graphics as they stick out really nicely and aren't just "default font." I love the use of music as well to convey the theme of the commercial. I do think some of the shots could just be cleaned up just a bit, the only one that comes to mind really is the shot at the beginning with the eyes of the person. It's an awesome idea, but the transparency of that shot made it look a little disjointed. You'll get better at that, though. Keep up the great work!
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