Boat Build Challenge Promo - ID# 34
Morton East
School Promotion
Entry Description
School Promotion video for our school's cardboard Boat Build Challenge.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 9:31 pm - Fun promo. Music goes with visuals. Would have been nice to have some nat audio to go with those paddling and underwater shots. And S.W.A.P.ping is KEY. Synch Words And Pictures. Make sure your text is synched up to what the viewer sees. Behind the scenes or around the pool shots of teammates or coworkers would add so much to this too.
- 3/4 12:54 pm - POSITIVES: Some shot variety, steady camera work. Music bed fits some frantic visuals of students paddling! AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: Looks like 3 different camera locations, plus one underwater camera, shot at last year's race. With your text overlays of Creativity, Teamwork, etc... they are just words on the screen with no visuals that really connect. These could have been CU facial expressions, shots of the teams building their boats or putting them into the water on race day, etc., so the B-roll doesn't really fit the "story" established with the words.
- 2/19 1:18 pm - -Good song choice...kept it engaging -Cuts made it feel engaging as well -Would have been nice to have nat sound of the water? -Could be cool to include some of the process of the building
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