Science Center - ID# 349
Homewood-Flossmoor
News Package
Entry Description
HF Highschool's new science building will be revolutionary to the teachers and students alike.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/1 1:26 pm - Good story, the music was a little overpowering with the track and the track was a bit fast. I got a little tired of the blue print renderings. The interviews were good
- 3/4 11:52 pm - Some interesting info on a cool addition to your school. I personally am not a fan of including music in news pkgs. While attempting to remain objective, the music has the power to sway the viewer and "feel" a certain way. In this case, the music has an emotional vibe to it and is overpowering. You have some sharp, clear footage, and come blurry footage. Try not to use so much drone footage. After the initial view of the footprint of the new building, what does the aerial footage bring to your story? Audio good throughout but watch placement of mics. Try to make them as least visible as possible. There's so many options out there for LTs, a suggestion to professionalize your pkg a bit is to try using something more than a stroked font.
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