The Hunter - ID# 342
Crown Point
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
A movie trailer about a girl who finds an ancient mask and, upon wearing it, pursues two teenage boys.
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- 4/24 11:25 pm - Good attempt and It’s clear there was effort put into the concept. That said, the camera work, pacing, and acting are areas that could use more development to really bring the trailer to life. Try incorporating more varied camera angles and close-ups to help tell the story visually and build tension. Matching the beat of the music with your cuts can also add energy and intensity, especially in suspenseful moments. Right now, the pacing feels a bit flat, but with more dynamic editing and thoughtful shot choices, it could really elevate the impact. Keep pushing, it’s a solid foundation, and with more attention to those details, it could grow into something really engaging!
- 4/24 12:40 pm - You had a decent concept here, and you had some shots and story elements that worked well. When the person turns into the hunter and falls to the ground, matched with the music, was a impactful moment. Sometimes the music was a bit loud and often overpowered the dialogue. Which then made it difficult to know what was going on. The story didn't always make sense, and it would be cool to see some more shots that focus on why the mask is there, who the people are, why is there a book that gives the answer to what's going, etc.
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