Trades Worker Becomes Educator - ID# 343
Hillcrest
News Package
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A news package about a trades worker turned
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- 2/28 11:49 am - Have your subjects look at the interviewer, NOT directly into the camera. The reporter track needs to be clearer and have more expression. This is a good visual story and you have some great b-roll
- 2/26 12:34 pm - Opens with a long shot of b-roll. I don't love going to black inside of a package. The framing of the interview can be better. The soundbite is really long and kind of goes in different directions. I think this is a great story choice. The interviews are looking directly into the camera.
- 2/21 2:29 pm - - First shot too long :11, shots in general, out of focus - Framing was off for SOTS - No NATS - Track is hard to understand - Cut to black - The quality of the video was good The package idea was good and very visual, the subjects were appropriate
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