Mirage - ID# 354
Batavia
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
Movie Trailer produced by Ryan Anderson (2023)
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 12:58 pm - The static audio perhaps wasn't the most effective way to sell this. I was a little confused if that was intentional. Some good creative shots like the body being dragged. Keep producing!
- 4/22 12:14 pm - Overall, this was a really well shot trailer, though the shots near the end did get a bit repetitive. But the story was confusing and I wonder if creating a more specific timeline that advances in storyline would also allow you to make some more choices with the shots and filming as well. That said, you have a great start here, just need to clean up some things regarding the storyline and then, from there, get creative with the filming, the sound, and then the editing. As for sound, I would recommend recording with another device so your actors voices aren't getting picked up along with the air in the room. Even having a phone recording a voice-over will help. Keep up the great work!
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