Charlie Wachtel Cinematography Reel - ID# 351
Homewood-Flossmoor
Cinematography
Entry Description
A collection of Charlie Wachtel's best 24-25 school year shots and ideas.
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- 4/21 3:03 pm - This reel displays a good breadth of genres and different situations. Clearly you are in control of the camera as we can see in many areas with very shallow depth of field, However, your reliance on handheld or the use of a stabilizer rather than using a tripod doesn't always display the full possibilities of composition, framing and lighting and focuses more on capturing a sense of spontaneity. This results frequently in some shaky cam but your use of extreme close-ups in many shots is super compelling. Good work overall.
- 4/15 1:47 pm - PROS - Composition & Camera Angles: Showcases a variety of camera angles and compositions, demonstrating an understanding of visual storytelling. The use of different perspectives adds depth and interest to the scenes. Creative Framing: There is evidence of thoughtful framing choices that enhance the narrative of each shot and draw the viewer's attention to key elements within the frame. IMPROVEMENTS - Exposure Control: Several shots exhibit overexposure, leading to loss of detail in highlights. Utilizing tools like histograms and zebra patterns during shooting can aid in achieving proper exposure levels. Focus Consistency: A noticeable number of clips suffer from soft focus, which detracts from the overall sharpness and clarity. Implementing focus assist tools such as focus peaking or magnification can help ensure critical focus is achieved. Lighting Variability: The lighting across different scenes lacks consistency, with some areas appearing flat or inadequately lit. A more deliberate approach to lighting design, considering the mood and tone of each scene, would enhance the visual impact. OVERALL - This cinematography reel demonstrates a solid grasp of composition and camera angles, contributing to effective visual storytelling. However, technical aspects such as exposure control, focus consistency, and lighting require attention. Addressing these areas will significantly improve the overall quality and professionalism of the work.
- 4/9 8:17 am - Good work adding a lot of shots to your reel to showcase your growing understanding of composition and editing. Keep pushing yourself to include more diverse shots- with different subjects, environments and uses of light. The dramatic sci-fi elements stood out with your use of artificial lighting and camera position.
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