Intro to Bowling - ID# 353

Shepard High School
Demonstration
Entry Description

Bowling is a very tough mental sport and can be very complex at times once you get in depth. Senior, varsity captain, and 2-time medalist Billy Kleina explains the basics of bowling to help kick start your journey and help improve your score, amongst help from other Astro bowlers.

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  • 4/28 8:44 pm - Good use of slow motion. The presenter clearly explained the process. Good use of text and graphics throughout the project. Voice-overs are well done. Music selection works well with the images you included in the project. Keep producing more videos.
  • 2/23 1:39 pm - This doesn't seem like a demonstration video; it seems like a news package that was turned into a demonstration video. The footage looks like you shot it before coming up with the idea for a demonstration video. A lot of the shots are handheld and shaky. The graphics work nicely and they are readable. It seems like you used titles and graphics to make up for the lack of clean camera footage. Watch out for typos or misspellings (in the Bowling is Mental section, your spelled courteous as courteious). Audio for the voice over was good, and the music bed was set appropriately, not intruding on the voice over.
  • 2/23 1:39 pm - This doesn't seem like a demonstration video; it seems like a news package that was turned into a demonstration video. The footage looks like you shot it before coming up with the idea for a demonstration video. A lot of the shots are handheld and shaky. The graphics work nicely and they are readable. It seems like you used titles and graphics to make up for the lack of clean camera footage. Watch out for typos or misspellings (in the Bowling is Mental section, your spelled courteous as courteious). Audio for the voice over was good, and the music bed was set appropriately, not intruding on the voice over.
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