Flossmoor centennial - ID# 364
Homewood-Flossmoor
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Last summer Flossmoor celebrated it's 100 year anniversary
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- 2/26 12:53 pm - Nice b-roll, where is the nat audio? The reporter does a nice job telling the story. Matched the b-roll well with the narration. Hide that mic. Jump cuts are in this story. Mic on the mayor is a mess. Went to baseball, then back, then back to baseball. The organization could've been better.
- 2/21 2:31 pm - - Very well shot - Needed more NATS, especially with the woman playing the piano - Needed to dress the mic, it was distracting to have the cord hanging over her shirt - Jump cut with the mayor at the mic - You see them chanting but don’t hear them – needed more NATS - Writing was long winded and wordy… - Track was good
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