The Boy Who Had CTSItis - ID# 365
Maine West
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
This is a mockumetary is about a boy with "Can't Take a Second Step Disease."
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- 4/23 12:18 pm - Camera, editing and sound were well done. The actors kept laughing during their lines, which was distracting. The concept wasn't strong enough to carry the whole film - this felt a bit too long. The joke was funny at first, but probably not thought out too well. Isn't he taking a second step every time he reuses his foot on the scooter? How could he get this far in life without a scooter or wheelchair? Also, not cool to make fun of a physical disability. Overall good effort.
- 4/23 10:05 am - I thought this was shot and editing very well. The timing of the editing with music and story was also well done. I thought the concept was executed well, but with comedy, some jokes toe a line. This one toed the line. I think if you chose a different premise, then this could've been even better.
- 4/21 1:08 pm - Good variety of different camera angles throughout the video. Music selection works well with the images you recorded. Good use of slow motion. Editing is well done. Keep producing more videos.
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