A Deal with Fate - ID# 365
Huntley
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
Movie trailer created for original short film, A Deal with Fate, centered around the seven deadly sins.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 8:10 pm - I'm ashamed that I tried to throw in a six before you said seven...every...time. Great close ups with the cards, nice angles happening. The quick cuts are great, that was a nice sequence. And then that slow draw of the hand dragging the card across the table, that was nice. Switching up between slower shots and quick cuts, but knowing when to do it and not doing too much is key.
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Judge 2
Positives: reat work on the editing rhythm! The quick cuts and rapid pacing create really nice momentum and keep things moving. Your music choice is intriguing and adds a lot to the piece.
Improvements: Moving forward, focus on clarifying the plot throughline so the story reads more clearly, and incorporate a sound design pass to enhance the overall production quality.
Judge 3
Positives: The editing works well for a trailer. The music works well tonally.
Improvements: Some of the cuts are a bit too quick for the eye. The color grading can be more consistent. The overall look can be more cohesive.
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