The Bird - ID# 367
Batavia
Music Video
Entry Description
Music Video produced by Ryan Anderson (2024) An artist struggling with a drawing block finds himself getting inspiration falling into his own work.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 2/24 9:01 am - This was pretty exceptional! Love that even with the mix of animation and live-action shots that you found a way to tell a story, even if it's just simply the subject dealing with writer's block. Love your use of editing here and the variety of shots you use to make it that much more interesting. Really creative and fun idea.
- 2/21 8:50 am - The music video captivated me with its intriguing shots and masterful use of depth of field, creating a visually dynamic experience. What struck me most was the gradual development and crescendo of intensity and creativity throughout the video. It's a testament to the filmmaker's skill in crafting a narrative arc that keeps the audience engaged from start to finish. The incorporation of animation for dream sequences was a particularly inspired choice, adding an extra layer of depth and imagination to the storytelling. These moments not only complemented the music but also enhanced the overall visual appeal of the video. In summary, I found the music video to be exceptionally well-executed. It's evident that a lot of thought and craftsmanship went into its production, resulting in a polished and captivating piece of art. I commend the creators for their talent and dedication and eagerly anticipate seeing more of their work in the future. Keep up the outstanding work!
Judge 1
Positives: Compelling Narrative: The story you've told in this video is incredibly engaging. The way you've paid attention to details, like the use of the concept of "true art," really brings depth to the narrative. This attention to detail makes the video not just a viewing experience but a journey through a well-crafted story. Effective Use of Camera Angles: The way you've played with camera angles and perspectives is noteworthy. These choices in camera work do more than just tell the story; they make the viewers feel a part of it, creating an emotional connection that's crucial for any narrative. Seriously great job on this.
Improvements: Color Grading: The only area that might see some improvement is the color grading. Currently, the video has a slightly greyish and flat appearance. Adjusting the color grading to add more vibrancy, especially in scenes where you'd like specific elements (like the pink shorts against the green grass) to stand out more, could enhance the visual impact. This minor tweak could bring out the richness of the colors, making the visual experience even more engaging.
Judge 2
Positives: Excellent story, even with the mixed media the concept and narrative were clear and affecting. The use of animation was fantastic.
Improvements: There was a cut to black that could have been eliminated after an animation sequence. I would have liked to have seen some higher contrast lighting, too, not just what looked like available light.
Judge 3
Positives: Some of the animations are fun and effective. Terrific blending of live-action and animation. The lead performance is engaging.
Improvements: The color palette of the animations can be expanded. 2:33 the green patina is not attractive nor compelling. It doesn't look good and brings the story down.
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