Life with Cerebral Palsy - ID# 361
Huntley
News Package
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News package student feature
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- 3/11 2:37 pm - What an inspiration subject matter. It was an impactful story but it does not fit into the typical "news package" category because there was no reporter track besides the short voiceover in the beginning. Be careful with editing- there were a lot of jump cuts in the interview that needed to be covered. You picked a really good story teller as the subject for your story - the story just needed to be told
- 3/5 3:36 pm - Great story!! Beautiful shooting. The music helps propel your story by setting a mood. Add dissolves between your sots or cover edits with broll. To make this even stronger, bring the reporter vo track back at the end. It ends a lttle abruptly.
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