All the Thoughts - ID# 388
Homewood-Flossmoor
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When a regular girl finds a mysterious necklace, her life changes instantly. Suddenly, her inner thoughts are spoken out loud for everyone to hear.
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- 4/30 7:44 pm - Positives The Main Character's side eye is amazing. The thoughts are good, it felt like this started as a poem. I literally gasped when that boy heard her. I was like, "What! But he heard you, girl! That's what we want, right?!" I was invested, hahaha. Improvements Tease it even more. What happens next...does she start to enjoy that people can hear her, does it start to fade, does she start using her voice? Does she start losing her voice? Is her voice in the necklace?! What are the stakes in the story?
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