A Morning for Tea - ID# 388
Antioch Community High School
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
Tea making gone wrong.
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- 4/23 12:12 pm - Nice variation in composition. It can be difficult to make something visually interesting when it is all shot in the same tight space. You were able to achieve this with different angles. You didn’t go wide until the end, but I was still easily able to navigate the geography of the space. I wasn’t too clear on some story elements. Was the problem that the tea tasted bad or that it had negative side effects? Is this a commercial for NesCafe? It might also be cool to hear some of the natural audio in the mix with the narration and music. Nice work. Keep going!
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