MMEA Fest

This is a short narrative about about a girl's day to complete a very important task!

4/23 11:30 am - Very sweet and to the point, the stakes could have been higher or more directly related to the fear of rejection. The camera composition was well thought out and well exposed, but the warp stabilization used to cover up the shaky footage was a bit jarring and too noticeable. The dialogue was clear and the music works well with the script – the music jump in the ending was a bit abrupt, I would recommend more smoothly fading into the audio spike. Overall, the lighting was well exposed, but there were some moments where there was struggles with shadows or blown out windows. The editing was clear and well paced. Strong and believable performances. Nice job!
3/19 10:15 am - Very nice story here! You incorporated some great camera shots at the beginning with the getting ready and downtown scenes. Vary your audio levels though when you have dialogue, the phone call scene is drowned out by your music. One thing I would say is watch reflections when filming, I noticed your camera operator in that last scene in the glass door.
2/21 3:58 pm - Good variety of shots: CUs and MSs which makes your editing flow nicely. The lighting is also working in your favor. The title card should stay on the screen a little longer so the audience can read. A little more sound design rather than just music could help tell the story.

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