York FineArts Week - ID# 394
York
News Package
Entry Description
About how york's Mr.gemkow the director of fine arts week and fine arts week committee member lilyanne petersen are preparing for york live and Fine Arts Week. Also about what both of them like and are looking forward to with Fine Arts Week/York Live
Copyright Info
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/13 10:58 am - The first two pan shots of an empty auditorium lost me on the story, unfortunately. You want to begin a package with the most visual shot you have and perhaps nats when you can. The story needed nats, the shots were very shaky. The track was nice and it was informative but overall, the story did need some work with the fundamentals.
Judge 1
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 2
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 3
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 4
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 5
Positives:
Improvements: