4/25 11:00 pm - Lots of potential here. Some shots are blown out or on the verge of being blown out. Hide the mic cord. Try to vary your broll shots a little more. Audio is clean. Shot falls out at the end. Reporter, try to record your VOs at the location you are shooting rather than back in the classroom or in your house. Piece has a fun feel to it. Keep working!
4/1 1:53 pm - The room were the track was done had an echo. The mic cord needed to be hidden. Needed more nats full and didn't think it was a compellingn story