Hiding In Plain Sight - ID# 402
Neuqua Valley
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
This is the trailer to an award winning silent film created last fall.
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- 4/23 12:27 pm - I like the pace and style of this video, that was quick and fun. Moving forward, I think you need to work a bit more on the storyline and adding some storytelling ideas aside from just the song and those wide shots of the ghost. Without more details, I couldn't tell what was happening. Keep working on storytelling and then some filming fundamentals, from various perspectives aside from wide shots. Keep working hard!
- 2/26 2:55 pm - Nice job shooting. I would work on the storytelling a bit more. It was hard to get a sense of what the movie is really about. The blood on the ghost? The girl's facial expression made it seem that she didn't even like being with the ghost after the graphic revealed the ghost "can find love." That part was confusing. I liked your song choice, which elevated the mood of your content, giving a better indication of what the movie is about. Remember the whole point of a trailer is give just enough of the story away that it makes viewers want to watch the entire film.
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