10% - ID# 402
Maine West
Music Video
Entry Description
This is a music video for the song "10%" by Kaytranada.
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- 4/14 11:52 am - STORY: I think your story is captivating, however the narrative isn’t entirely clear until the end of your video - particularly the role of the girl that is singing. For me, it’s difficult to understand her importance in the story or how she may relate to the main character. Consider including this character in more shots interacting with other characters rather than just showing her singing. This could help the viewer understand the character’s connection to others and make her presence at the end feel more like a resolution than a surprise. SOUND: Your audio mix is well-balanced. If you would like, I think it would be nice to add in some subtle SFX that can help immerse the audience into your story. For example, including sounds of footsteps/running or yelling in the background. CAMERA: I think you do a great job of including different camera compositions. One shot that stands out is the scene where the girl is singing and looking downward at the camera (Ex: 1:02). This shot specifically might be stronger if re-framed at eye level. That said, if the angle you have currently was intentional to show that she holds some kind of authority it works too. Just keep in mind that the way your frame a character affects how the audience perceives that character in the story. LIGHTING: I think you do a great job lighting your scenes inside the house and outside of the house especially at 0:38. We can clearly see the character’s face which adds to the story. EDITING: The editing is well-paced and follows the beat of the music. It really lets the viewer take in what is on screen!
- 2/18 9:33 am - This music video effectively embraces a retro style, capturing the aesthetic and feel of a bygone era in a visually engaging way. The attention to detail in styling, color grading, and overall presentation helps transport the audience into this nostalgic world, making the video stand out. The use of camera angles and movement is well-executed, adding dynamism and visual interest throughout. Strategic framing and shot composition contribute to the storytelling, while movement keeps the energy flowing and prevents the video from feeling static. These elements work together to maintain audience engagement and enhance the overall production quality. The singer's energy is a definite highlight, bringing enthusiasm and charisma that make the performance feel authentic and engaging. Their stage presence contributes significantly to the video’s effectiveness, reinforcing the mood and style of the song. Additionally, the music editing is well-matched to the tempo, with cuts and transitions that align seamlessly with the rhythm, helping to create a cohesive and polished final product. To elevate future projects, consider experimenting with lighting techniques to further enhance the retro aesthetic or incorporating subtle visual effects that complement the style. Overall, this is a well-crafted and entertaining music video that successfully blends creativity, technical skill, and performance energy. Great work!
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