Vasovagal Syncope - In Theaters April 1st - ID# 402
Riverside Brookfield
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A dramatic
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 7:13 pm - "I can't believe they fit this much house into this little house." - That was my favorite line of this. Some of your shots looked really great, the framing, the lighting. Like when the person was throwing the basketball, some of the door handle shots. And then some of the shots were not at the same level. The lighting felt off, framing and/or blocking was just slightly off or they turned their head and then we couldn't see their face any more. The story was also a bit confusing and felt more like bloopers that were pieced together at times.
Judge 1
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Judge 2
Positives: Nice work on creating rhythm with the on-screen text and narrator voice! Some of your shots are really great and show strong visual instincts.
Improvements: Moving forward, the text-with-narration approach gets repetitive, so let's think about varying it. The green and red lighting is hard to see — I know it was intentional, but it doesn't always work. Let's work on lighting to make sure we can see what's happening. Some framing could also be improved to strengthen the shots.
Judge 3
Positives: There are some great shots and some wonderful uses of color.
Improvements: The voiceover recordings/performances can be stronger, Trying to mimic a voice you have heard in trailers is tricky as they are not easy to do. The actor you have does not have the vocal reosnance to pull it off. beaciuse that doesn't work the jokey stuff falls flat.
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