Consumed by Consumption - ID# 416

Glenbrook South

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Entry Description

Nowadays, buying clothing is easier than ever before. Maybe even a little too easy. Fast fashion plagues our society, leading to overconsumption which has lasting negative impacts on our world.

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Judge 1

Positives: 1) sound track 2) story concept

Improvements: 1) too many graphics at close 2) uninteresting camera shots 3) may have worked better as a :30 psa

Judge 2

Positives: End title information was enlightening and effective. Like how the subject had more and more good piled on her as she kept clicking (lots of clicks was a good tool for the message of the spot - as was the sound of the dewing machine even when you didn't see it).

Improvements: Couldn't tell who was sewing - was it some factory worker or someone at home trying to stop all the buying? Seemed a little empty without ANY music at all.

Judge 3

Positives: 1) The pacing of the edit and story was very effective. 2) Great lighting and camera work.

Improvements: 1) There is no clear call to action on what one can do to stop over consuming. Lacks resources for people to look into. 2) The stakes in the video itself aren't high enough. Want to see the real effects of over consumption, not just that you end up with too many clothes.

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