Day in the Live of Harley - ID# 417

Riverside Brookfield
School Promotion Non Sports

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This year RBHS added a new friend the the community - Harley the dog. This promo was created in an effort to show the school community that Harley was here, safe, and friendly

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  • 3/24 8:27 am - This is a pretty cool idea, something that I've not seen before in a high school production, so from that angle, you've got some originality at work. It's interesting to see things from the dog's perspective. I was kind of anticipating that we'd continue to just see the dog's eye view-- but you broke that up nicely showing us the cutaways of the general environments where the dog was w/ students, etc. If you would have just used the dog-cam, I think you would have lost your audience EX: "Ok we get it, the dog's wearing a camera" <-- but, you didn't do that! Overall, this was a neat way to introduce the school community to your new friends. Makes me wonder why we don't have that at my school too? Good job, this was something different-- and for me, you avoided some of the pitfalls of using a piece of equipment and different perspective sparingly, and not letting the novelty of it dominate the piece.
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