Winter Sports Promo - ID# 428
Riverside Brookfield
School Promotion
Entry Description
Promotion for the Winter sports at RBTV
Copyright Info
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 7:18 pm - STORY: This video really shows a lot of what your school has to offer! I think you provide a lot of different clips that give the audience all of this information! SOUND: You do a great job mixing your music bed in with the different sounds in your video. I really appreciate the sound that we hear from the clip at 1:32 and 1:38! I think these extra sounds add a lot to your video! CAMERA: Great job including a variety of different camera shots! You demonstrate a lot of knowledge through your composition! LIGHTING: I think you did a great job with lighting! I really like the stylized blue lighting you include in a lot of the close up shots of players. EDITING: Overall your pacing was great! There was a shot at 0:39 that I thought was on screen too short. I would recommend holding on this for a little longer. It’s hard to process what you actually see when the video is playing. One thing I would also recommend is to maybe consider color grading. You have such a stylized shot that your video starts off with at 0:09 (and you continue to use these) that it’s almost jarring or off-putting when we see clips like these at 0:24. It could be as simple as adding more contrast!
- 4/25 1:07 pm - You did a great job with the edit for this promotion! I really enjoyed your use of speed ramping/slow motion throughout the video, it matched the tone of the music you chose. You also did a great job with the studio lighting and mixing in natural audio throughout. Overall, fantastic promo!
Judge 1
Positives: Loved the juxtaposition of live action and athletes posed Great highlight of ALL activities and fans
Improvements: Music began to drone on by the end - would have liked some kind of build musically Some more focus on the fans/coaches supporting the athletes (although there was some of this element!)
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Judge 3
Positives: The pacing of your edits is very effective during starting around 20 seconds. The quick cuts emphasize the variety of athletic possibilities at RB and demonstrates the excitement that’ surrounds them.
Improvements: Think about ways to cut this down to about 90 seconds or a little longer. You can edit out most everything after 2 minutes. A lot of that information has already been covered in the earlier part of your project. Consider cutting on the beat of your music. The piece you chose has a distinct rhythm. It would add an element that will further add to the excitement of your project.
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