Hallway Etiquette Tips - ID# 438
Elk Grove High School
Demonstration
Entry Description
Security guard Rip Van Sky goes over hallway etiquette tips.
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- 4/8 8:51 am - The video had a very funny aspect that effectively grabbed attention. The inclusion of the security guard was a good addition, though the camera shot of him in the booth could be varied to enhance the scene. Adding some background audio would enrich the overall experience. The use of text was well executed and contributed positively to the video.
- 3/1 7:36 am - Good use of text throughout the video. Good use of different camera shots to support the presenter's voice-overs. Good use of music at the beginning of the video to catch the viewer's attention. Keep producing more videos.
- 2/28 10:02 pm - Including a school security guard not only gives your video credibility, but it also builds a connection with your audience. This technically works for demo, but if you want to revisit it later it would also make a great PSA. The graphics on screen were good, but maybe reduce the size to get words all on the same line (instead of a couple letters dipping to the next one). Audio levels and editing are well done. Maybe add music in the background to give this video even more life. Nice work overall! Good use of tips and humor together.
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