Artisan Sourdough - ID# 449
Metea Valley
Commercial
Entry Description
Promoting Patit Three doughnuts.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 10:59 am - Great editing with the music. I also like the shots and composition, especially of the honey being drizzled on. I think this could be a little bit shorter. Maybe less like one or two less shot of the whole product in the beginning and end. I definitely want to eat one of these!
- 3/3 1:36 pm - Yum! Yum! Yum! Great camerawork and the music set a nice chill tone for the commercial. Maybe add come get your sourdough, and then list the name of the cafe to really clarify what the commercial is for.
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