Drown out Breast Cancer - ID# 451
Metea Valley
News Package
Entry Description
Cover the Metea Valley girls swimming and diving team and their annual breast cancer fundraiser. Here is some more information about the event from the organizer.
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- 2/28 11:52 am - Have your subjects look at the interviewer, NOT directly into the camera. Start with restructuring your script to break up the long sots. Write stronger lead ins to your sots; they should also include some information. Upcut at 1:00 in. Great content for a story :)
- 2/26 12:38 pm - News packages should not have background music, even if it does help set the tone. Reporter should lead the story a little more than just presenting another person to talk about the focus. This could use NATS. The SOT was too long and feels like this is just a story that is all soundbite and no storytelling. I learned a lot, but not in a normal news format. Lower 3rds?
- 2/21 2:29 pm - - Writing was weak – introducing a SOT and then she introduces herself - NO Nats – needed nats of swimming - SOT was way too long and edits were jumpy - Shots got clear and creative near the middle of the package - The subject matter was good, lacked execution - Package felt too long - Framing on SOT was off - Needed lower thirds - Story was informative
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