MMEA Fest

Covers what the show Yellojackets is and interviews students about their upcoming predictions and thoughts on the new season.

3/3 12:05 pm - This doesn't really feel like a news package. I don't mind videos like this as I believe student voice is great, but there isn't much newsworthy about this. Also, I don't believe most audience members would be aware of this show, and if you aren't, these answers aren't engaging. How about not wasting time having them say their names. The question on the screen feels a little lazy. The interviews aren't framed right following rule of 3rds, but the audio is clear.
2/28 3:14 pm - -having all sources say their names on screen was a waste of time, use lower thirds instead -wanted more reporter track inserted in between sots to make this a news package, not simply graphics asking questions - work on script writing - It was a good idea, but needs to be restructured if you want it to be a news package.
2/21 2:40 pm - - Audio was not in sync - Jumpcuts to interviews - It was an interesting concept but not necessarily what I would consider a good storytelling package

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