MMEA Fest

Short but sweet! A quick demonstration on how to make America's favorite cookie.

4/24 8:19 am - The music is soothing and that shot of the cookie being split apart was beautiful and made me want to eat a nice warm cookie. You included a nice variety of shots and it started with a nice narration, but then the narration just stopped and some of the ingredients weren’t shown. It would have been nice to hear you mention baking it, and then some type of ending like, “Enjoy” out loud. You started the cooking journey with us with your voice, we want to end our cooking foray with you, too!
4/1 12:51 pm - Be sure to blend in your VOs better - could hear where you made edits in the audio. Either where you cut out parts of your VO or where it stopped and started. Make sure those edits are smoothed out a bit more so they aren’t so sudden. While we didn’t see every step of the process (which is ok), be sure at the end you use your VO to explain what to do - just like you did at the beginning. You mentioned what to preheat your oven at even though we didn’t see the oven. At the end, tell the viewer how long to bake the cookies for (even though it’s on the screen at the same time).

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