Don Beez - Past Feelings - ID# 462
Richards High School
Music Video
Entry Description
This is a music video for the original song, Past Feelings, by the talent in the video, Don Beez. Shot and edited by Alexys Gonzalez
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- 4/16 9:35 am - STORY: Your video visually communicates the longing that comes through in the lyrics of this song. Your story balances symbolic and literal elements as we see a guy reflect on a relationship contrasted with a date scene. A strong storytelling decision was to never show the girl’s face. This helps to emphasize the distance emotionally but also physically and connects to the idea that the girl never really connected with the guy in their relationship. The juxtaposition between the singing shots and date scenes adds to the contrast of how things were and how it feels now. SOUND: Your audio track is mixed appropriately and the mix does not peak. Important note for festival - make sure to always check and review festival rules before submitting your work. There is a swear at 1:09, which would disqualify your video under the MMEA broadcast standards rules. Always double check your lyrics and audio! CAMERA: You include some strong visual choices in your video. The depth of field is well used - drawing out focus exactly where it needs to be. The car scene at 0:20 is well framed. There does seem to be slight noise in this shot, which could be from a high ISO. If possible, try filming with just a bit more light - even using soft sources - to avoid that graininess. LIGHTING: You used lighting effectively throughout your video. The warm yellow tones in the date scenes make those moments feel more inviting and emotionally significant. It’s a great contrast to the performance clips. EDITING: Your editing is well paced. You use light leaks effectively, not just as a visual aesthetic but also as visual transitions.
- 2/18 9:56 am - This music video exudes a professional quality from start to finish, with a strong attention to detail in both technical and creative elements. The use of lighting is excellent, helping to create depth and enhance the overall atmosphere. Each scene is thoughtfully lit, whether to highlight key moments or set the mood, adding a level of sophistication to the production. Additionally, the use of depth of field is effective in directing the viewer's attention to the most important elements of the shot, contributing to the overall visual storytelling. The video benefits from a great variety of locations, which not only keeps things visually interesting but also helps to reinforce the narrative and maintain the viewer's attention throughout. The different settings add texture and variety, making the video feel dynamic and engaging as it unfolds. This variety in locations also supports the pacing, ensuring that no scene lingers too long and the energy remains fresh throughout. The pacing of the video is spot on, with smooth transitions between scenes that keep the flow natural and engaging. The camera angles are well-thought-out, providing a balance of close-ups, wide shots, and creative perspectives that maintain visual interest. The transitions are seamless, with effective use of burn effects that add a unique touch to the overall aesthetic and complement the music’s energy. These stylistic choices enhance the overall professional quality of the video and give it a polished, cohesive feel. A highlight of this video is the charismatic on-camera performance. The energy and presence of the performer are captivating, bringing the song to life in a way that draws the viewer in. The lip-syncing is also on point, matching the energy and timing of the music, which helps maintain the believability of the performance. Overall, this is a well-executed, high-quality music video that demonstrates strong technical skill, creativity, and professionalism. The combination of lighting, camera work, transitions, and engaging performance makes for a thoroughly entertaining and visually appealing video. Excellent job!
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