4/24 11:58 am - Cool shots, sound effects, and editing techniques. Product commercials like this where there's not a story, can get lost in the shuffle and hard to stand out.
3/4 6:44 am - Dropping the drink in the water seemed a little abrupt, and at the end it seemed a little more like a Target ad. Maybe say something like "Sold at Target" in the corner, while keeping the drink in the main frame.