Favorite Day - ID# 476

Batavia
Commercial

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Commercial produced by Rozzie (2025)

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  • 4/24 11:58 am - Cool shots, sound effects, and editing techniques. Product commercials like this where there's not a story, can get lost in the shuffle and hard to stand out.
  • 3/4 6:44 am - Dropping the drink in the water seemed a little abrupt, and at the end it seemed a little more like a Target ad. Maybe say something like "Sold at Target" in the corner, while keeping the drink in the main frame.
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