Crafting A Memory - ID# 472

Homewood-Flossmoor

News Package

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A news story covering HF's Clothing Construction Class's Memory Bear project.

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• 2/26 1:37 pm - News packages do not normally start with title screens or music. The broll is really well done here. I like the tight shots. The problem here is these are all interviews. This is newsworthy, but a news package needs a reporter narration track. This could work well in the nat audio category if you were able to get some clean nats.

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