BHS Rock the Runway - ID# 486
Batavia
Live Event Coverage Non Sports
Entry Description
An excerpt of the outfit portion of Rock the Runway - where students create outfits and accessories from anything *but* fabric.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 5/1 2:01 am - You did a great job balancing the focus between the outfits and the story each model was telling, which made it engaging to watch. The shooting and switching felt smooth and intentional, and the transition between models was handled really well. One thing to keep building on is framing. There were a few moments, especially with the “Peacock” look, where going a bit tighter or adjusting the composition could have helped better showcase the full outfit.
- 4/29 10:42 am - I thought you could have framed "Peacock" a little better & tighter to highlight the whole dress. I liked how you balanced the emphasis on the outfit & the story the model was telling!
- 4/16 2:16 pm - Very well shot and switched appropriately throughout. Smooth transition from first model to the second and camera angles and movement was smooth and purposeful throughout. Well done!
Judge 1
Positives: Great camera following including solid zoom-outs and pans following the model as they walk the stage and keeping them in frame. Also, when the model changes direction or turns their back to the cam, great job cutting to another camera that then follows them towards that change of direction.
Improvements: Not much to really say here, but I did notice on the first model there was a couple of times the cameras seamed to be out of focus. The audio was solid but if there's an audio there applauding, I would suggest having a crowd mic available to pick up some of the audience reaction sounds.
Judge 2
Positives: Smooth camera movements, and good video transitions. Graphics were good. Has the look of a Paris show. Good closeups of the dresses (the subject of the piece).
Improvements: Could have kept the music a little more prominent during dialog.
Judge 3
Positives: Really great stage and set. Great job on the close-ups of the models and outfits. Camera angles were on target. This was well done.
Improvements: Music was overpowering and missed on any crowd reaction. Balance is good. Enjoyed the bio graphics, could have made those even stronger with additional visual support with the voice of God background information vs an empty stage.
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