MMEA Fest

In a world of nonsensical, Generation Alpha brain rot, an unlikely trio join forces to fight back.

4/24 10:27 pm - The use of effects in this trailer is really fun and adds a lot of energy to the story. Each character also gets a nice intro, which helps establish their personalities and roles. That said, the overall premise is a bit unclear. Are the heroes gaining their powers from the brain rot, or are they trying to stop it from spreading? A little more clarity on that central conflict would help the audience connect with the stakes and better understand what’s driving the story. Good start, just a bit more context could really pull it all together!
4/24 7:22 pm - My students laughed at this, and as they were the intended audience, I'd say you got the comedic nature of it across that you wanted! As someone who is older, I didn't get a lot of it, but don't hold that against me. As a trailer, it was a little hard to tell what the characters were going to do and how they were going to do it, but the superhero shots at the end were fun. Though at times it was hard to tell who was on the 'good' side and who was not. You have a fun style with this one, just hone in your story and make it evident how the conflict in your story could be resolved (but don't resolve it for the trailer) and maybe even show some of your heroes in trouble.

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