My Pappy Won't Stop Inflating - ID# 499

Lockport Township

Comedic Narrative

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Entry Description

Pappy makes a wish to Santa. All he wants is to get up again after being hobbled by an ankle brace that weighs him down. When his wish comes true, it might be more than he or his grandson bargained for.

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• 4/30 4:07 pm - Interesting story. The acting was a bit over the top. I agree with the other judge that the film does get lost in the silliness.
• 4/28 12:25 pm - This is definitely a unique story, which I appreciate. Some of the camera shots are a little too shaky or roughly composed. The acting is decent, but often crosses the line into too silly or amateur. There are a few great bits of writing and dialogue that get lost in the silliness. This is an odd one - I can't tell if it's offensive towards old people with dementia or just harmless weirdness. It didn't make me laugh, but I think this was a valiant effort at trying something different.

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