How to Break Up with Your Girlfriend - ID# 491
Shepard High School
Demonstration
Entry Description
This demonstration project shows you the best way to break up with the not-so-love of your life.
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- 4/8 9:13 am - Your video showcased some creative camera angles, including a cool shot through the blinds, and effectively used text to explain the steps. However, the text bubble was a bit hard to read due to the phone movement, and the wide shot could have been framed better to fill the space. Additionally, the audio was somewhat inconsistent throughout the video.
- 3/1 8:04 am - Music selection works well with the images you recorded. Good use of text throughout the video. Good variety of different camera angles throughout the video. Performers did a great job acting in the video. Script was well written. Keep producing more videos.
- 3/1 7:26 am - Good selection of creative shots, especially at the beginning of the video. Lighting, editing, pacing and graphics are well done. The humor of this script is also shining through. Music choices work well, and while we can hear the actors well enough, if you can get the mics even closer to them it would help eliminate the slight echo we hear off of their voices. Timing for this video was 3:07 however and the category rules state no more than 3:00 minutes, so that might be an issue. Very funny, nicely done! (Could have also been in comedic narrative I feel...it had some good humor).
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