4/30 2:21 pm - The ringing at the start works really well and sets the tone right away. The music comes in at a good moment to kick off the montage, and the framing and shot composition are both strong. The pacing also fits the subject matter nicely. Just make sure to keep the informational text on screen long enough for viewers to read it fully. Overall, great PSA!
4/27 11:42 am - Really nice use of texting and showing the various messages in a clear way. Love the song and your graphics / GFX editing for the overwhelming sensations and abyss the character was navigating. A couple of points to work on; your audio can do a lot for your message, so give some cues with audio shifts or markers. Additionally, change the song at the end when your message appears, or add in some additional audio elements to showcase the descent into chaos / trouble the main character is navigating. Keep up the great work, your filming and story-telling through edits clearly show you're on the right track.